Whisper into my ear
and scream to me that you'll be here
Pick me up and thrown me down
and watch my heart slowly drown
Bound to you I am, like the devil's command
Your glaring eyes, always watching my back
Making my heart a nervous wreck
Trapping me into an endless black pit
only you know where I sit
Crawling back to you I come
like the Beacon's everlasting drum
Consumed I am by you, once again
My heart tearing shred by shred.
the lines that are underlined I need help with because they sound awkward, also if you have any additional comments to my poem, you can say them as well. As of yet, this poem has no title.
thank you
-sara
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