Ive on and off been playing with the same characters and the same storyline but the problem is making it all fit without being entirely cringe. When I look back at where I started with this novel I have to stop because the amount of plot holes and how believable it all was, was just not ok.
It's not that I dont have ideas I just dont know how to put them down in the right way because everytime I try it never pans out the way i expect it to.
hopefully this thread will help me write more and flesh out the storyline some more. If you have any tips or you think I could write parts better please tell me. I want to finish Asha's story because after almost 10+ years I think she deserves it.
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