Okie so I finished the first part of this short story and I feel like it's kinda rushed. The second part especially I find is quite rushed. I'll have to slow it down somehow. Maybe even make a new part. Like a third part so it, like, explains more.
Yeah. =)
Well. Can't really figure out what else to say.
Oh! Yes, um, Im wanting this short story to have a lesson that is obvious. Women can have freedom like men do in any place on earth. They can stand up for their rights as well. So now... I'll definitely edit a lot more and then hopefully I can make the lesson obvious. ^ยท^
Okay, I'm done my talk for now. If I have more to say, I will make another post related to this short story.
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