4 characters, two plots, and no matter what i hate how i paced it. I'm struggled with several plot points like
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that mirror doppleganger plot
and the characters believing the new teacher is kinda weird...
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as they turn out to be monster hunter
it's been awhile too but most of the plots i've done were just one continuous plot. this time around, i wanted to get my hands on doing two plots it seems....
Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield. — Billy Collins
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