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advice on bridging stuff together



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Wed Mar 08, 2017 3:44 pm
hopefull1writter says...



in my story their is a little contradiction with the way my female character reacts both physically and in conversation with this boy compared to her thoughts. Its like she's two different people- easily intimidated with males because of her abusive step-father and yet she has these steamy thoughts of the boy. Anyone have any advice on how I can bring these things together a lot more?
  








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