How do you feel about stories that end in a "what's next?" manner?
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I have an idea for a story that I want to call "The Admirer." The tagline for it would read "He is her best friend; she is the love of his life." The story opens at a high school graduation party and there might be drinks involved, I haven't decided. The male character confronts the female about his feelings towards her. What are those feelings? Um, did you read the tagline? Basically this guy has loved this girl since childhood; I plan on making the chapters in the story based on a "here and then" sequence. Chapter A is the present, chapter b is a memory, chapter c is the present, and so on. And the memory chapters take place from both character's point of views while the present takes place only from the guy's point of view. Anyway, back to my question.
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I really want to leave the story off with the guy asking the girl how she feels towards him and she, in a moment of shock, responds with "I don't know." and I want to leave the ending of the story open to the interpretation of the reader.
How does that technique sound? Feel free to judge the plot too.
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