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Underwater world



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Sun Apr 17, 2016 10:45 pm
queenofscience says...



I have an idea that I have had in my head for years and yeasterday I got reminded of it because I went to the aquarium.

My story takes place in the future in a costal city under a dome in the ocean. ( because of goable warming.) My main character, Hanna, is wanting to be a marine biologist like her moather was.

So, in my world their is some radation in the ocean ( I'm guessing from some sort of accadent.) Some of the animals and people get radiation poisoning.

I also could imagine Hanna doing studies on animals like jellyfish and such. But why?

I need help with what could go wrong in my world.

I intend for this to be a short 50 or 100 page story. Maby a novela.
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46 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 891
Reviews: 46
Sun Apr 17, 2016 10:47 pm
queenofscience says...



I would like it if I could discuess the plot with someone.
I am the science and science fiction guru.

The mind is beautiful, yet brilliant. You can think, create, and imagine so many things.

Eugenics= scientific racism.
  








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