I decided to revisit a Pokemon fanfiction I stopped writing almost two years ago. I have a lot planned out and have been thinking about ever since I started writing it, but I'm surprised to see that I don't know a whole ton about my main characters. Here is the personality I have for Thomas:
Thomas is a calm, collected person. He always tries to remain calm, even in dangerous situations. He has kept his mother from becoming permanently depressed, even though she is still very sad. Thomas is also very nice to people, especially his younger brother, Marcus. Thomas and Marcus have a good relationship. Thomas and Marcus do mess with each other sometimes, especially Marcus to Thomas, but they still love each other. Thomas does his best to act respectful and polite towards others, but he can still be a serious person. His father’s death has even made him more mature than he was before.
Thomas also has visions of the future. This could potentially keep him on edge after each one, testing his calm and collected nature. So far the visions have only happened at night, but I don't know if that's the only time.
Whenever I try writing through Thomas' perspective, I end up writing whatever and making him sound dry/out of what his character should be. I'm a complete noob when it comes to writing, so creating characters and writing them is really hard for me. Does anyone have any advice?
P.S. My three main characters are all serious for different reasons. Is this bad? Should I give each of them something that makes them energetic? Thank you.
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