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My main protaganist needs a good introduction. It's the first chapter, and it's a fantasy. Taverns- nope. I've tried that twice, and both times it felt off.
Any ideas?
Cheers.
Didn't I say no taverns?
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What genre is it?
What is the character like? Who is the protagonist? What is a little bit of the plot or the feel/theme?
What sort of feel do you want for the opening? What other information beside the protagonist do you want to deliver? Where is the protagonist? What's the general idea for the beginning?
methrirr123 wrote:Sometimes it's easier to open with many characters. When you have a main protagonist that you want to introduce, maybe have him introduced by or with another protagonist. Maybe they're talking or arguing pettily. He's a blacksmith, so maybe he's trying to teach an incompetent apprentice who knows nothing about his history.
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