The story is a mix of modern fantasy, action (conflict/fighting/violence), and romance.
This, in hopes, is eventually going to become a trilogy, with a fully-forever-closed ending.
This isn't exactly the full-plot, only about half of it. It talks a lot about the antagonist and the background more than it does the main characters... ^^;
I'm going to cover up the characters', cities', and specified names, as well as I'll leave out some of the finer details; I hope it's not too vague, I just don't want anyone copying.
Most of this was typed from scratch... So... yeah, it may suck a little... oo;
[The World] is in chaos. Entire continents, once filled with life, have become nothing more than barren hunks of tainted soil and rock. Life can no longer thrive in those lands, because of what man has done. The discovery of nuclear power, and the sins of greed and envy had caused this blankness on the face of the planet. Only one uncontaminated continent of four equal-sized countries survived.
Yet man doesn't know when to stop. The North and the East had begun to dispute over land. Three years later, it becomes war.
Is it really man who is trying to control this new war? Or is it something else, a higher being... a Darkling, or so [The Gods] call them, demons.
Human beings were created by [The Gods] as lower beings, with a choice in their life. Man was given the option to live in the Divine or in the Dark. Human life was to bring balance and intellect into the world, to enhance it, and discover it. In [The Gods'] eyes, this form of life was their greatest creation, and should be given time to make up for their mistakes, and walk which ever path they might choose.
[The Antagonist] used to be an ally of the Divine, but his opinions of man were different, and he left, hoping he could fix the [Higher One's] mistake. He did this by killing off humans, by controlling them into creating almost "pointless" wars, in the [Metal Armor] ages. He wasn't only trying to rid the world of man, but perfect it. Man domesticated animals, and those animals were slaughtered at his hands.
[The Gods] were beginning to tense up over the traitor. They needed to stop him before all human intellect was lost. They were going to get rid of him, and the best way to kill off a demon was to slowly weaken them, until their body could no longer endure a heartbeat. They found him, and casted a curse, causing [The Antagonist's] body to slowly burn from the inside.
[The Antagonist] had backup. He had found out how to transfer his soul form to another physical form, in this case he would go from [An Animal] form to the form of a human-figure. Without the awareness of [The Gods] he used the body of a young man, a prince, and hid in disguise for centuries.
He got followers, and with them, he formed an empire in the Darkling world.
Years later, his heiress was born. The mother died shortly after her daughter's birth.
His daughter, however, was not like him. When old enough the gain some intelligence, she knew what he was doing was all wrong. [The Protagonist] spoke her mind to her father several times. Each time she spoke to him, she threatened him, and it worried him, even as powerful as he was. [The Protagonist] would grow up to the power her father had, and could over throw him with her bare hands.
At the age of five [The Protagonist] was had died at her father's hand, but was soon to be brought back to life by the [Second Rank] of [The God's] and was raised in the Divine until the age of fourteen, she was one of the four [Guardians of Humanity].
During those nine years [The Protagonist] was thought to be dead, [The Antagonist] was remaining quiet, knowing [The Gods] had gotten suspicious again. When [The Protagonist] returns to the physical world, her father makes another move in order to save his life and accomplish his duty. [The Antagonist] doesn't only want to get rid of his daughter, but he wants her power, he wants to draw her over to his side, to fight for him, but [The Protagonist] always refuses.
[The Protagonist] works alongside two comrades, they are a team of three out of the four [Guardians of Humanity]. The countries are never at peace because of [The Antagonist] and they must protect both the people and bring an end to the killer in the shadows. Become victorious, or die in the attempt.
So what are your opinions? Is it unique? Does it need a little more thought? Please be gentle...
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