Alright guys this is my first try at a good story-line, this in no way reflects my style of writing i simply rushed through this to see my abilitys of making a storyline so please tell me what you think
Demi-Gods 1.Vurn God 1.Achon
2.Scyn
3.Rohj
4.Kyrin
Achon- Creator and ruler of all.
Scyn- Known for deception and trickery.
Kyrun- Known for Beauty and Kindness.
Rohj- Known for Knowledge and eternal life.
Vurn- Known for a Quick-witted mind and a level-head.
Gods Plot- Achon the god of all things grew tired of mastering and creating all things
Known. So the god decided to choose 4 of his greatest Demi-gods, Scyn, Kyrun, Rohj and vurn.
Together they are to bring to life a planet of fruition and greatness to honor the God of
creation. First Rohj the Demi-god of knowledge and eternal life was to create the world it-
self, Rohj having past experience doing so, created it with ease. Then came the beauty of
the world which was done by the Demi-god of attractions and kindness, Kyrun. Next the last
was the Demi-god Vurn's turn, which was to check over the world for flaws and slight frac-
tures which would be most definatly seen in the eyes of the great one. So the world was com-
plete, all things except the races were born which each Demi-god had been given the oppurt-
unity of creating.The Race the Ahlahnai were created first by the demi-god kyrun and placed
in an area of the world all of its own named Ashahn. The ahlahnai were a beautiful race,very bright
radiant skin almost luminecant, bringing out the dark blue eyes of the very over-confident-
race.And lived in a city made of the earth it-self, jewels of the finest quality. The next
race was created by that of the demi-god Rohj who created the race, the Drendons.These were
more of a magical people, focusing on the energies of the cosmos to do there simple tasks
for them, nothing more. They had a fairly strong stature most had long hair and dark skin.
They were placed on a continent of there own named kryorn. The next race to be created was
by the hand of Scyn, the deceiver. Scyn seeing the other races realized he could make a race
far more superior to the rest, and they, his people could slowly take over the world. and so
He created them, Hamans, they had a dark-red skintone, very built and very tall with perfect posuture.
But they could be very flexible and stealhty also. They had akward shaped tusks that
passed downward over the lips and the chin, black eyes with slight illumintaion at the
pupil, Hair is rair but stringy and black, they are also very short tempered, smart, and
organised.But there was one flaw in Scyn's plan, he had forgot vurn had not made his creation
yet and feared the worse.And so Vurn entered the world and started to create the race the demi-
god felt fit. But as the demi-god entered the world a presence of astrall-dissarray was evi-
ident and the demigod quickly sought out the answer and found what it was. High in the mountains
of Ashahn laid a horrid warmongering race even defying the demigod him-self and so the demi
god left the world for the time being to go inform the god of all things Achon. As Vurn
approached the deity he could feel his eyes burning through, peering into his very thoughts.
As soon as the feeling subsided the God rose up in fury and demanded Scyn a punishment of
death and his race be secluded to an island covered in hatred far to the north, and so he did.
But Vurn being the one with a firm head on his shoulders decided to make some changes of his own.
First he created an island far south as far as he could away from the Hamans as possible and
named it paradise and created the most beautiful race ever to be created. But vurn was smart and gave them knowledge
of war and tactics to defend themselves and how to create there own weapons, There name
was the "Trytons".
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