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Trying to write a Fantasy novella



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Fri Aug 01, 2008 11:28 pm
kris says...



Hey. I am trying to write a fantasy novella. If any of you have time, would you please be so kind as to take a look at my 3rd chapter and tell me what you think?

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Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:38 pm
powerofthree says...



I'm new here, but I will anyways.
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