Hello everyone.
I've been working on something for a few months now, but my readers in real life aren't the most dependable, especially for solid criticism and feedback. Here's the first segment; pending community reaction, I'll add more.
EDIT-while-previewing: It seems that copying and pasting removes most of my formatting - I hope you don't mind attachments.
Cheers, and enjoy.
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