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I stands there under my
weeping shower head feeling
empathy while its thousand tears
from its thousand ducts slave
once a day (or twice when I got hockey)
to wash away the filth i got into the last few hours.
Then I leaves him up there, sitting lonely,
til i wanna use him again.

And lookin at the beads falling off
my porcelain etched skin i know it ain’t him bein used.
So I get a little jealous thinking
I wish I had someone to cry on, too.




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very interesting style. I'm not sure what is a typo and what's not. But I like it. I'm not sure how many people would, though. so just be careful.
"Poetry is not an opinion expressed; it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound or a smiling mouth." -Kahlil Gibran




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No typos, incase anyone's wondering.



here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings