Essentially, I've been writing for the best part of a year and I finally almost finished what seems to be my main project after several re-writes and plot changes and a long and unnecessary process of me checking for mistakes and I finally decided to see if there was anyone who would take the time to see if my plot line is any good. Here goes nothing!
The plot is mainly based around two characters (Adrian Williams and Heather white) where they become entangled in the plan of a machine lord (The Monitor) who tells them that he has been part of a long line of "Beholder's" of a Mantle, made by the god Zealance, and that they must become the final Beholder's of this great responsibility. Soon they become deeply affected by the turn of events as the Monitor attempts to directly locate them. Yet, a greater goal than that is sitting out there as what the Monitor is doing is causing time to reset (creating a cycle) before they can ever get this Mantle by an evil force in the universe named the Deathsingers. Adrian, with the aid of the Ether (those who helped create the Monitor) set out to bring an end to this cycle and claim the Mantle whilst he deals with the hardships of his and Heather's relationship, the knowledge of higher powers in the universe and the knock back of his father being diagnosed with Alzheimers.
I hope someone reads this because I'm new and I'd love to get some feedback. Also i'm sorry if the plot described sounds confusing, I'm not so good at explaining the story thoroughly without going into huge detail
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