I mean, I'm not awesome, but I can edit if you'd like! I reviewed something of your's yesterday, was the stuff I pointed out the kind of thing you're looking for?
Don't we all? My mom has offered to do mine. She is an English geek, and I am decidedly opposite of that. My grammar is terrible. I followed a diy book binding guide and put my story in book format, which really helps it circulate and get edited.
Someday, everything is going to go right for you, and it will be so wonderful you won't even know what to do. — Hannelore Ellicott-Chatham, Questionable Content