I mean, I'm not awesome, but I can edit if you'd like! I reviewed something of your's yesterday, was the stuff I pointed out the kind of thing you're looking for?
Don't we all? My mom has offered to do mine. She is an English geek, and I am decidedly opposite of that. My grammar is terrible. I followed a diy book binding guide and put my story in book format, which really helps it circulate and get edited.
Follow your passion. Stay true to yourself. Never follow someone else's path unless you're in the woods and you're lost and you see a path. By all means, you should follow that. — Ellen DeGeneres
My mom has offered to do mine. She is an English geek, and I am decidedly opposite of that. My grammar is terrible.
Just let me know. 
