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Wed Feb 08, 2006 3:08 am
Griffinkeeper says...



The member of the week is Smaur!

Three words why: 9 Page Critique.
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Wed Feb 08, 2006 4:04 am
Elizabeth says...



.... HOLY!!!!
9 PAGES???
SHE DESERVES THIS... AND SOMETHING TO DO!!!
WHERE IS THIS 9 PAGE CRITIQUE?!?! * is calm now*
  





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Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:15 am
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Jeeze Louise how the heck...? what the? WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wed Feb 08, 2006 6:28 pm
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.................................. I'm speechless..................Okay my speechlessness is over now I can congradulate her. Congradulations Smaur!!!! You definately deserve this if you are willing take that much time to help someone.
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Wed Feb 08, 2006 6:28 pm
-KayJuran- says...



woah! :o

smaur definately deserves it!! :)
  





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Thu Feb 09, 2006 12:56 am
Jennafina says...



Nine page critique on MY STORY!!! (Called Asher if you want to see the major crit, its on page two.)

Congrats! You totaly deserve this.
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Thu Feb 09, 2006 1:05 am
ladydark says...



congrats smaur, whomever it may be... -pats teh smaur on teh back-
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Thu Feb 09, 2006 1:05 am
Snoink says...



*grumbles*

I'm next... ;)
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