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Sat Oct 10, 2009 3:25 am
Adnamarine says...



And by soon, I mean very very soon!

Especially when you're new to the process--but it can be true of anybody--writing helpful reviews can be tricky to get the hang of. I know it can be difficult to read a piece, and then try to look at it in a more in depth, analytical way. Plenty of YWSers find themselves scratching their heads and saying, "Where can I start?" "What is there to say?"
We know it's tough. So, to save you from those infamous one-liner reviews, we came up with this plan.

Hosted by yours truly the Instructors team, we're going to hold reviewing classes, or discussions, in the chatroom (not the Lounge, but A or B). We will schedule different events for reviews on poetry, different genres of fiction, and perhaps (depending on the level of interest) we might even expand to include reviews in the Art and Photography forum!
The hosting instructor(s) will select published pieces, or pieces on YWS (with permission of the author) to use as examples, and together figure out what's good, what's bad, and how you can fill an (at least) 50 word, full length review with helpful advice!

Let us know if you're interested!
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Sat Oct 10, 2009 3:27 am
pudin.junidf says...



I'm very interested Adna!
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Monotone.

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Sat Oct 10, 2009 3:44 am
Lucinda says...



Totally interested. :) Always glad to improve at...telling others to improve. xD
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Masquerade
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Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:19 am
foxfire says...



i'm joining...this will be interesting
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Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
  





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Sat Oct 10, 2009 2:03 pm
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BondGirl007 says...



Yeah, totally in.
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Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:03 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



:smt026 Awesomsauce! I can finally help somone! *woot*
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Sat Oct 10, 2009 10:53 pm
Mira says...



I'd love to be part of this as well. :) My reviewing needs a bit of help, if you know what I mean. lol
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Sun Oct 11, 2009 5:25 pm
Adnamarine says...



The first one has been scheduled! This Friday, the 16'th, at 7pm EST. Rosey Unicorn and myself will be leading this one (other instructors may be present), and we're going to be discussing short story fiction reviews. Specifically, a story Rosey volunteered for us to use: Christmas Magic. We'll look at her original version, evaluate/analyze/discuss, and then how she was able to revise it due to the reviews that she got the first time around.
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Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:46 am
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Bloo says...



I'm in
That User Who Changed Their Name A Dozen Times And So No One Ever Knew Who They Were Half the Time and When They Did Only Used Bolt.

The tragic tale of losing all #Brand for nothing in return.

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Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:59 am
Kamas says...



I'll try to be there to throw in my two cents on reviewing tips.

:D
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Mon Oct 12, 2009 3:35 am
bludragon525 says...



I'll come. :)
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Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:58 pm
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Mr.Knightley says...



Cool. I'll bring the beverages. :wink:
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Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:52 pm
Merlin34 says...



I'll bring some fresh calamari and cous cous.
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Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:11 pm
lilymoore says...



I call dibs on the Chat Couch!!! Well, mostly I just wanted to shamelessly bump this thread but still :D

I'll be there helping out too!
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Wed Oct 14, 2009 7:10 pm
foxfire says...



cool but what is the time of the review?? vbecause i might not be in the same time zone??
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
  








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