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Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:31 pm
mkjohns says...



Hey, i have just posted a short story in the history section about a small Roman battle and i have been waiting for about two days and I still do not have any reviews :cry: please may one of you do a honest review of it, than you
it is in the history section and it is called the first taste

thank you

John
  





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Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:54 pm
Snoink says...



Done and done. Though you may not like it. I'm a rather picky reader. :P

Next time, critique other stuff! That way, more people will notice you and actively look up your work without you having to ask. :)
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Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:10 pm
Fishr says...



Completed, and with photos too!

I'm rather picky myself but you did ask for an honest review.
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  








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