Dude- and is a conjunction, you can't use it to start a sentence.
For centuries, theologians have been explaining the unknowable in terms of the-not-worth-knowing.
- HL Mencken
Lie together like butt.
Presenting the GFuture, soon to be the Gnow, reality presented by Google.
Welcome to GEarth.
~Baske in the randomness~
You call that a critique? I could have critted myself better than that.
You liked it huh? So then explain to me why you're trying to change it.
You're characters talk smarter than they should. My characters live in the 18th century for crying out loud. Of course they are going to talk smarter than we would.
Quarrels would not last long if the fault were only on one side.
--La Rochedoucauld
"An unexamined life is not worth living..."
---Socraties
Your continued existance is a slap in the face to any of Darwains theories.
For centuries, theologians have been explaining the unknowable in terms of the-not-worth-knowing.
- HL Mencken
Lie together like butt.
Presenting the GFuture, soon to be the Gnow, reality presented by Google.
Welcome to GEarth.
~Baske in the randomness~
You liked it!?! I hate it. I wanted critique... see that little message at the bottom... oh wait. You never read it, so how would you know what I wrote at the bottom?
Never interrupt your enemy when he's making a mistake... unless it's to remind him that he won't fail... he just won't kill you.
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