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Thu Jun 19, 2008 5:49 pm
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tdownes says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post384615.html#384615

Keep up the photography work, aestar 101!
He's like fire and ice and rage. He's like the night and the storm and the heart of the sun. He's ancient and forever. He burns at the center of time and he can see the turn of the Universe. And ...he's wonderful.
  





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Thu Jun 19, 2008 6:42 pm
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Icaruss says...



I object.

smorgishborg wrote:Therefore, I've critiqued Dimension of Music by coryab


Me wrote:I didn't forget about you: post380677.html#380677

Invasion of the Penis Snatchers, man.


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Gadi. says...



Icaruss's THE BED.

:D Just thought I should bring this up again! It's really handy and fun.
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it is so far away
  








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