If you ever feel like you have the time I'd love for you to read THE BEARER and tell me what you think... but it's SUPER long... So if you don't have the time I understand.
The robbed that smiles, steals something from the thief. ~William Shakespeare, Othello Boo. SPEW is watching.
I have two stories I would really appreciate critiques of:
One is called: Under the Desert Sky, and its in the "Other fiction" place. You might need to search for it.
The other, is untitled and called something alon the lines of "As yet untitled story(help requested)" or something like that. Its also in the other fiction, I believe on the second page. You'll be able to tell its mine, because its the only "untitled"-esque story wheere I am the topic starter. Thanks.
"He who takes a life...it is as if he has destroyed an entire world....but he who saves one life, it is as if he has saved the world entire" Talmud Sanhedrin 4:5
!Hasta la victoria siempre! (Always, until Victory!)
-Ernesto "Che" Guevarra
Oh, Sam, I'm so GLAD you offered! You don't even know how ecstatic I am!
Anyways, I'd like you to read "Changing Me" in the Romantic Fiction. I'd really love just one critique. In return, please post when you comment on either that or this, what you would like me to read and I'll try to get to it.