Hi everyone,
I am looking for opinions on, and questions about, the story of my novel, Darkness (a working title).
In the intensely religious Europe of the Dark Ages, a young peasant boy escapes to find medicine to save his mother and his beloved. He leaves despite rumours of an imminent barbarian attack on his village; despite the dangers of murderous bandits looming in the forests and near the roads; despite that he will be hunted down by the knights of his lord, for no peasant may leave the lands he works; despite that he is only chasing rumours of a medicine that is being practiced in secret by men who are being hunted by a fanatical warrior priest.
Any criticisms welcome, thank you.
Alen
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