I'm not sure how many of you have read my "Voices" series, but I've been working on them for several months now and am really enjoying myself.
The basic idea behind them has been that we have voices in our heads with different characteristics such as anger, love, sensibilty etc. The stories take place in reality as well as inside the narrator's mind where the voices vie for supremecy. To help clarify who is speaking where, I've seperated things off a little by putting reality in blod letters and putting the voices in italics. It seems to have worked rather well.
However, for a little while now, I've wanted to have a piece that shows a conversation/arguement between my two main characters that also shows the voices inside both of thier heads. This would make it so that I have three different "scenes" going on at the same time and I'm not sure how to do that without confusing the reader.
Thoughts?
(If you need a better picture of just the kind of thing I'm doing, here are the links to the Voices stories that I've done in the past:
In chronilogical order:
Voices II
Voices I
Voices III: The Break-up
Voices IV: We miss you...)
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