I always seem to have a problem with this, even when I'm writing from just a single characters perspective. I always feel like my writing is extremely choppy and doesn't flow like when I'm reading a book or a very good fan-fiction. I consider writing to 'flow' when actions, thoughts, feeling and descriptions move together without abrupt change, throwing the read into a new state of mind.
Am I rambling again?
Does anyone here have any tips for making a character's story flow together better?
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