Okay, I am currently writting a story in first person and I'm not sure how describ a person in first person.
I don't usually write in first person so I really need your help on this!
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zankoku_na_tenshi wrote:"My room is painted blue. And by the way, I'm a five-foot-tall redhead with brown eyes, wearing a red t-shirt, jeans, and white sneakers." It would just sound... weird.
zankoku_na_tenshi wrote:Also, if you feel like you have to do it, try not to get too fancy with the adjectives: "gleaming emerald orbs" and "curls cascading down like liquid gold" rather than simpler words just reek of purple prose and, perhaps worse, just scream "Canon Mary Sue!!"
Chocoholic wrote:Use other people to describe them. Maybe their best friend is jealous of their hair, or their father keeps commenting on how similar they look or something.
Kay sighed to herself as she pulled her brown hair into a ponytail; long hair was nice, but it always got in her way.
I sighed to myself as I pulled my brown hair into a ponytail; long hair was nice, but it always got in my way.
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