Okay, so I'm writing the synopsis for FREAK and the words "sexual favors" seems to come up in my brain when describing the second part of the story. I sort of want to use that term, since I can't think of any other description to describe it that would be nicer, but at the same time I don't want to scare off the agent.
Should I just go for it and hope that the term doesn't freak out the agent, or should I just omit it from the synopsis?
I'm describing a particularly important character's cruelty, by the way.
Thanks!
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