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Sat Jan 05, 2008 9:17 am
Warlock says...



What are indented sections in writing?
AND
Why/when do you use them?
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Sat Jan 05, 2008 9:29 am
Loose says...



Aren't they (**may be wrong**) used in identifying paragraphs in published novels?

Eg.

"Bob decided he wanted to go for a walk, but no one wanted to go with him. He asked around, but everyone turned him down. The dog, his brother, his mum, they were all busy. So he went for a walk himself.
-(indent) While on his walk, Bob came across something rather fascinating. It was a shiny new watch. He really wanted it, but decided not to keep it because it was someone else's, and stealing is wrong."


please, mind the disgusting story used there.

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Sat Jan 05, 2008 11:36 am
Sureal says...



Yeah, you just use 'em to signify a new paragraph. On YWS, we just put a space between each paragraph, because idents don't come up.

Indents can be used in poetry also, but for different reasons.
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Sat Jan 05, 2008 4:49 pm
Meep says...



Also, if you're doing a blockquote (often used for quotes more than forty words long in scholarly papers) you indent everything, not just the first line of the quote. */geek*
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Sat Jan 05, 2008 6:27 pm
Warlock says...



Well being a geek is never a bad thing ;) It's what separates the dreamers that have genuine possibilities from those who don't :P

Oh, and thank you several times, I thought it was paragraphs, however the versimilitude (Yay I think I used a new word correctly!) of that was doubted; primarily because the one of the skill descriptor found on the AQA GCSE website said to include indented sections - This caused me to think of it as something more than it was.

P.S.
-Someone tell me if I used versimilitude incorrectly.
-Also, when can you change your YWS username? Warlock I just picked because it was all I could think of, and now it just seems so... bleh(?)
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