I've got so many stories started right now, it's unbearable, but I'll just pick one for this topic.
In a nutshell, I'm writing a story about a girl who is a princess and she hates being a princess, she wants to be a pirate. She grows up, runs away from home, becomes a pirate and meets a lot of different people along the way. (good or bad) She becomes wanted for tons of money and her family won't take her back in. She does have friends, and she has a "boss" kind of. He helped her by giving her a ship and everything. She falls in love with her childhood friend and her other friend gets jealous. She tries to kill her "boss" a few times because he only makes her life worst.
ANYWAY, in the end, the whole "the captain must go down with their ship" occurs and she either lives or dies.
But, if you were actually reading the story, is there anything I can do in it to make it better or should i do some kind of weird ending? I have a weird ending already but I wasn't sure if I should keep it.
Please lemme know, I've been writing this story for about 2 years now lol (Then someone stole my flash drive and I had/have to rewrite it)
Thanks!
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