Hi, everyone. I'm struggling with something and wonder if you have any advice.
I have two main characters, a guy and a girl.
In the beginning, the guy is very shy and the girl is the absolute opposite. Over the course of the story, we see him get more confident and her show more vulnerability. This is what's supposed to happen.
However, I don't want her to seem too meek and him to seem too bold. More like equals.
Also, I'm struggling with them when it comes to character flaws. As humans, we all have things "wrong" with us. We're not perfect. I'm having a hard time because I feel like the girl needs to be less flawed. I'm worried people will find her annoying. On the other side, the boy needs to be MORE flawed. He's supposed to help the girl through her journey, but he can't always be the all knowing, always has an answer guy that's perfect. I'm concerned there isn't enough of a balance and I don't know how to fix it.
Any ideas?
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