Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.
Anyways, with writing dialogue, the best I can say is to read it aloud to yourself. Frequently if it is not realistic sounding, then you'll pick up on that when reading it out loud.
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