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Storygirl95
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Tue Mar 01, 2016 5:08 am
Storygirl95 says... · Tue Mar 01, 2016 5:08 am
Okay, I need help.
My school's magazine deadline for submissions is coming up really soon, and I want to submit something. Not to bother you all or anything, but do you have any suggestions on what to send in? Did you guys really like any of my stories?

It can be anything I wrote, but it has to be under I think 13 pages double spaced. So I have quite a lot of freedom in the choice. The competition seems pretty strong, but I'm hoping mine can surprise everyone and make it in. :>

Again, so sorry to bother anyone. Just confused and huddled in a panic corner haha.
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TimmyJake
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Tue Mar 01, 2016 7:15 am
TimmyJake says... · Tue Mar 01, 2016 7:15 am
YES.

I loved the one about the favorite parent! I think that, while it does need some editing and a possible rewrite to bring it up to competition standards, it's so adorable and I love the story and characters you created so muchhh.
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