This doesn't flow like a good poem; it's an experiment I'm doing to see if I can, in fact, write a story using poetic form. It's an excerpt. The character is George, also known as Glitch, a young thief and... well, yeah. Prostitute. This is when he first introduces his method of employment.
Critiques are welcome; however, when you criticize, please be constructive! There's nothing worse than receiving criticism but no offer for improvement.
Here it goes.
Dirty Little...
Some people consider
every one of us to be the
lowest of the
low; we are
young boys and girls,
out of money, life
until we must take a
ride (literally) on a dirty road,
bound to forget the client (it
only lasts so long anyway).
Don’t you know
your body is a business?
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