I wrote this as a school assignment when we read "The Revealers" a few years ago in English. It is sort of childish but I think its okay. Don't go easy on the crits, because it needs it.
I followed Rakanja home
The night I saved his life.
I meant him no harm, truly
Ask anyone.
I go to his school;
It’s called Onondaga Junior High,
But we all call it the hell hole.
Rakanja Lehkmul is one of those kids.
The kids who get beat up
Because they’re too fat
Too thin
Too smart
Too different.
Rakanja is from Africa,
Not sure where,
Maybe Ethiopia or Sudan?
There’s this one guy,
Davie Turner,
Who thinks its okay
To beat someone up
Because they speak Amharic
Or whatever.
Davie had Rakanja crying,
Cowered up against a dumpster,
Sweating a cold sweat
And panic-stricken.
Davie was relentless,
His gray eyes flashing
in the glow of a flickering street lamp
Wolfish and serpentine
All at once.
“Please!” Rakanja cried,
In his accented English,
Eyes wet with tears,
Lips wet with blood.
“Sorry, Sorry!” He switched languages,
But I knew what he said.
Rakanja was saying,
“”Why are you doing this to me?
What did I do
To deserve this?”
Davie hissed venomous words
At his prey,
Graceless and savage and unfeeling.
I pulled Davie away,
My heart thumping
Just as hard as Rakanja’s.
“Go home, Davie,” I said.
“And leave Rakanja alone.”
I picked Rakanja up off the pavement.
He watched me with gracious eyes,
Saying, “Thank you, Anna, thank you.”
Even though he did not know the words.
I walked him home,
And sat with him long into the night,
Cleaning his wounds
And whispering words fo comfort.
“It’s okay, it’s okay.
Davie’s gone."[/i]
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