My first "her."

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Brown hair, brown eyes, the body of a goddess.
Tanned skin, cute face, long hair.
Just everything about her makes me want to smile.

But you see, the problem is
she'd never want me.
she'd never want a girl.
she wants a guy.
i know everyone can see.

Its just her lips, her eyes, her teeth, her hands, her feet!
everything.

I've never felt like this before.
I can't even describe it.
But i'm not going to try.
Because i have to keep it a secret.




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Gender Male
Points 1969
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With this girl around I'm glad I'm a guy.
It was well constructed and pretty much to the point.
What else is there to say. Good job
"my job was twofold 1)save lives 2)take lives. Not necessarily in that order."



In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien