I sat there,
watching the water move gently
down the stream.
And it's,
soothing.
I fell in.
And let its peaceful current,
carry me off.
So many things below its surface.
Mysterious.
The cool sensation of being in the water
came over me.
What mysteries lie in this.
Amazing.
I made a poem like this about fire a long time ago,...I think the other ones better so you might wanna check that out. Heres the link http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=2279&highlight=
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