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Thu Oct 20, 2005 6:07 pm

edders05 says...

Hi! My name is Edmund and I am new to this forum. I have posted a couple of things in thefantasy section. Im thirteen and live in the UK.

PS Could someone review my story the Shadow Blight?
Cheers :wink:

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From the shadows a fire shall be woken
A light from the shadows shall spring
Renewed shall be blade that was broken
The crownless again shall be king
J.R.R Tolkein

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Thu Oct 20, 2005 7:16 pm

Emma says...

Whoa, you say you're 13 but YWS says you're 35.

Oh and welcome.

Last edited by Emma on Thu Oct 20, 2005 8:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Thu Oct 20, 2005 7:30 pm

mystical*dragons says...

Hi there, welcome

Hope you have fun here

....and so they lived happily ever after

moral: the faerie lies

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Thu Oct 20, 2005 9:45 pm

niteowl says...

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Thu Oct 20, 2005 9:46 pm

niteowl says...

Hiya! Here's your gift:

:shock:

:lol:

:oops:

:cry:

:evil:

:twisted:

:roll:

:wink:

:!:

:?:

:idea:

:mrgreen:

mas_wink:

mas_happy:

mas_cool:

mas_evil: :dreidel: :menorah: :frosty: :thumb: =D> #-o =P~ :^o [-X [-o< 8-[ [-( :-k ](*,) :whistle: O:) =; :sick: :-(

:-(

{|= :-$ :-s \:D/ :-# :hearts_eyes: :love: :lots_hearts: :elephant:

:elephant:

"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

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Thu Oct 20, 2005 10:36 pm

J. Haux says...

Hey, Edders! I KNEW you couldn't be 35! :wink:

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I read what you have of The Shadow Blight so far. I just haven't had time to comment. sorry.

I'll try to later. What was your original title?

Welcome to YWS! I consider myself relatively new, but I've been enjoying it.

~Jacquie~

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Fri Oct 21, 2005 1:41 am

Areida says...

Hey, Edders, welcome to zee YWS. I'm Areida. Hope to see you around sometime!

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Fri Oct 21, 2005 3:35 am

tinkerbell_09 says...

LO!!!!! Welcome to YWS!!!!!

I live not because God wants me to. But because I have the will to go on.LIFE IS HARD. And I don't know why. And I don't plan to understand.

I have been impressed with the urgency of doing. Knowing is not enough; we must apply. Being willing is not enough; we must do.
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