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Sun Jan 25, 2009 10:49 am
Ben1243 says...



Need some reviews- its for an extension english project at school.

Cheers.





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Sun Jan 25, 2009 10:53 am
LilyJamey says...



Um, Ben... Firstly, swearing is confined to the Lit. Forums. Secondly, this is not a place to advertise your poem - it's a place to talk about yourself.

Simply edit your post to X and title to Attention:Please Delete.

Cheers,
Lily.

PS: Posts are supposed to be 2:1 - if you post a piece of work, you have to make at least two reviews for it.
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Sun Jan 25, 2009 10:59 am
Ben1243 says...



Hahah oh my god... hey I'm sorry I said damn... you're sposed to be a novelist right? You ever read The Catcher In The Rye?

And talk about myself? Why would I wanna do that? I'm a poet- read the poem (Stains in lyrical poetry) that's all you need to know about me.





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Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:01 am
LilyJamey says...



Honey, that's why it's called "About The Authors".
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Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:02 am
Ben1243 says...



Did you ever consider what I just said? "Honey"... please tell me you're not 13 like you're profile says.





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Mon Jan 26, 2009 3:28 am
Krupp says...



Trust me, you'd be surprised how many kids are on these forums...but then again, it is called Young Writers Society so you should probably have expected nothing less...

With that said, I'll take a look at your poem, if I can find the time for it.
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 3:48 am
Antigone Cadmus says...



Hey, if you want reviews, post this in the "Will Review for Food" forum.

If you (nicely) post in my Will Review for Food thread, I'll be sure to look at it.

You ever read The Catcher In The Rye?


Yes. Yes I have. We're writers. We read. You aren't the only one who reads classics.

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