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Sat Dec 11, 2004 7:55 pm
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Perra says...



I stay away from poems. I can't write them, so I shouldn't critique them! Although I did try to read and post on some a week or two after I joined.
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Sat Dec 11, 2004 9:11 pm
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Elocina says...



I don't know how good any of my poems are, but I love riddles. Here's one that I heard. If you want to venture a guess, either pm me or post it.

What is greater than God,
More evil than the devil,
Rich men want it,
Poor men have it,
And if you eat it,
You die.

This should get some head scratching. If you've already heard it, please don't blurt it out. I want to have some fun. :twisted:
  





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Sat Dec 11, 2004 9:25 pm
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Perra says...



Pride? :?: :? I have no clue...
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Sat Dec 11, 2004 10:47 pm
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Crysi says...



I know the answer!! :D

One of my favorite riddles ever.

Don't worry, I'll let them guess :wink:
  





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Sun Dec 12, 2004 12:54 pm
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uniaeca says...



I've heard of that one before, just cant remember the answer...
  





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Sun Dec 12, 2004 9:10 pm
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Elocina says...



I'll let it go unanswered for another day or two. Thanks for not spoiling the fun everyone.
  





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Sun Dec 12, 2004 9:15 pm
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Firestarter says...



I remember this one! Won't spoil it though!
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.
  





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Mon Dec 13, 2004 2:11 am
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Perra says...



*goes off mumbling about stupid people who've heard this one before...*
YWS gives me carpal tunnel.

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Mon Dec 13, 2004 3:10 am
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Crysi says...



:D

Just think.. after it's answered, if someone else tells you the riddle, then YOU can say you heard it before! :D
  





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Mon Dec 13, 2004 3:13 am
Perra says...



Yeah, yeah, yeah! *grumbles about easy riddles being funner*
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Mon Dec 13, 2004 5:19 am
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Elocina says...



That's whats so great about it. It IS really easy...you'll hit yourself over the head when you hear the one-word, two-syllable answer.
  





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Mon Dec 13, 2004 5:21 am
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Elocina says...



btw, if it's really bugging you, you can ask one of us who've heard it. Not sure, but it should be the same answer. It's the only one that makes sense.
  





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Mon Dec 13, 2004 9:29 pm
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Perra says...



Just give me a hint. Like, point at an important line or soemthing...
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Tue Dec 14, 2004 12:11 am
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dele24 says...



I'm sure I've heard it before I just cant remember it
  





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Tue Dec 14, 2004 12:15 am
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Crysi says...



There is no important line, actually. *shrugs*
  








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