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Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:14 pm
daine says...



Hello...uhh...names TJ. I have wanted to write stories for the longest time but never found the courage to go and do something until now. I am more in the Sci Fi type genre but I like Fantasy too.

I joined this site after realizing that my sister couldn't criticize my writing to make it better, and I have no friends that would without laughing at me. Um...I really want to find someone to help me along the steps until I write a complete novel.

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Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:16 pm
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Fantasy me and you will get along perfectly look at my story it got many mistakes but i took about 2 and a half years writing it took that long because i kept taking breaks.
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Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:18 pm
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So you want to write a novel huh? So did I, until I realized I barely have the patience to write 5 pages. I have been considering going back into it lately... But anyway, I think you've come to the right place. This is a good place to get help on your writing.

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Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:22 pm
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We are sorry. Inquisitor, Zentillius, and Meshalidar have been suspended due to mendacious and pathetic behavior. Please excuse him.
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Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:26 pm
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Yep. This is definitely the right place to be. I'd be happy to help you with your first novel. I've written some short novels already, and think I've got a pretty ood handle on how to do it. It's intimidating at first if you start by thinking "I'm going to write a novel." Which is probably why I didn't have any problem with my first three, since it didn't really occur to me that that's what I was doing until I got to the fourth one. But anyway, I'm babbling, I should stop now. PM me if you want a critique.
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Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:48 pm
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24? Is that what constitutes as young these days?? (joke)

You'll be able to get a lot of help here, don't worry, and people won't hold back just to be nice. Welcome to the site and hope you stay a long time. I'm Jack.
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Wed Jun 29, 2005 5:06 am
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Lo. Name's Bootsie, yeah I'm the Queen of Crazyness. I like writing but I haven't finished anything yet and I don't really have much time to either. So I haven't posted any of my stuff yet.
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Wed Jun 29, 2005 5:16 am
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Hey, welcome to YWS! Sci-fi and Fantasy, eh? Right up my alley. ;)

Don't worry, we're here to help you through the novel. You'll find that some people are a bit pickier than others when it comes to editing, and some do full edits while others do general reviews. Just remember it's all (hopefully) constructive criticism and you should be fine. ;)

Feel free to ask anything if you have any questions. :)

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Wed Jun 29, 2005 9:21 am
uniaeca says...



Let me just note that I am more crazier than Bootsy and probably need to be in a nut house.
So welcome.

hmm btw did you get your name from Tamora Pierce's books?
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Wed Jun 29, 2005 10:18 pm
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You wish Uni. But I'M the one that needs to be put in the Nut House.... Don't ask....[/quote]
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