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Mon May 19, 2008 3:31 pm
melkor says...



It's my nature of course! :P

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Mon May 19, 2008 3:45 pm
cookie_pirate says...



It seems that I'm going to have a hard time in writing on your point of view. xD
I have so many things to learn.
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Mon May 19, 2008 3:47 pm
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Yes, don't we all.

I'm developing a very strange story at present, I'll make sure to force you to read it.

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Mon May 19, 2008 4:03 pm
cookie_pirate says...



Hm, well I might as well as prepare myself for your story then. :D
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Mon May 19, 2008 4:08 pm
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Think 'alice in wonderland' meets 'hitchikers guide to the galaxy' :P

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Tue May 20, 2008 12:28 am
cookie_pirate says...



Well then, I suppose your story is somehow related to comedy then? :)
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Tue May 20, 2008 8:39 am
melkor says...



It should be funny at least.
yet terribly random.

It includes, so far:
a debating panther, a writers conveinence, the snake that was to blame for sin, two chess armies, a metaphorical pinic, and a futristic land in which no-one talks just in case a war starts, as well as the villian, an actual grammar Nazi. :D

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Tue May 20, 2008 8:44 am
cookie_pirate says...



Lol. xD
Well I wonder how people communicate in the in which no-one talks.
How do they "talk"?
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Twilight Madness.
  





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Tue May 20, 2008 8:47 am
rubberduck says...



Well, you've got loads of welcomes, I guess I should add in mine! :D

Welcome to YWS! (though you're not exactly new.)
So... Erm...
Hi! :D

Feel free to PM me if you need anything! ^^
I'll be glad to help!
Oh. That's right...

PM me when you post other stories. I'll be glad to read them. (In fact, I'll go read your stories now! Haha.)

Well, I guess that's all from me.

Seeya 'round! ^^
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Tue May 20, 2008 8:52 am
rubberduck says...



Erm.. Correction.
I'll read your poem. (Which I just did. ^^)
Couldn't find any mistakes!
Loved it! Haha.

So, you will PM me when you post another poem, won't you?
I'd be devastated if you don't.
I don't normally read poetry, so you'll have to inform me when you post something new, I'm afraid. Sorry.

So, anyway...
I hope you're enjoying your time here in YWS! ^^
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Tue May 20, 2008 9:01 am
melkor says...



cookie_pirate wrote:Lol. xD
Well I wonder how people communicate in the in which no-one talks.
How do they "talk"?


well thats the hilarious bit, generally they write it down, or use sign langague, which none of the main chaarcters understand.
As speaking is illegal, they are shocked when you speak, and this isn't helped by the fact that the main character likes to read aloud.

It should be done by today, or at least one chapter will.

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Tue May 20, 2008 11:58 am
cookie_pirate says...



@ rubberduck.
Lol. Thank you.
Sure, I'll informyou when I have a new one. :)
See you around! :)

@ melkor
Well that would be really hard for the main characters then. x]
So have you posted it in here yet? :)
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Tue May 20, 2008 12:10 pm
melkor says...



I don't have much of it done.

I will give you a bit of it in advance if you like. :D

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Tue May 20, 2008 1:11 pm
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cookie_pirate says...



Oh, I can understand that. I guess. x]

Sure, I'd love to read even just a bit of it. :)
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Wed May 21, 2008 12:08 pm
melkor says...



Okay then, but be wary it's a draft.

"He felt that his whole life was some kind of dream and he sometimes wondered whose it was and whether they were enjoying it. "
"It is a mistake to think you can solve any major problems just with potatoes."
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