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Tue Jul 24, 2007 4:09 pm
Stillgrave says...



For those who know Kel, I shall say first and foremost that I am her husband in real life. Yes, I also write as well and even though I did join back in 2006, it was more merely just to satisfy my wife's desire that I share what I write than anything at the time. But, here I am now since she asked me to post up a critique about her story, and am critiquing others as well. I would do more, but too tired to at the moment. Later on I might go ahead and post up a few things from some of the works I'm doing. Presently I am not published (nor have I tried to be), but perhaps someday I shall endeavor to do so. Anyways, for now.. I have tuna awaiting me and a bed that needs my company lest I be too tired for work tonight. Later.
  





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Tue Jul 24, 2007 8:36 pm
Eric says...



Hmm, so you've been here before...

Well welcome back, then! I haven't met Kel, because I too have not been on here in ages, but oh well. I look forward to reading some of your work, and maybe I will actually get the chance to post some of mine.

Ah. Tuna. Wonderful wonderful food... See you around.

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Tue Jul 24, 2007 8:43 pm
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Hi!

I'm reading Kel's story, and saw your crit. :)
Hope you come out of your shell more often and post lots of stuff!

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Wed Jul 25, 2007 9:47 am
Alainna says...



Hey and I suppose welcome back to YWS!!

Hope you find it useful around here, it's actually really helpful to share your work.

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Thu Jul 26, 2007 11:15 am
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Thank you, the stories that I am presently writing are all tied together but yet are of different genres in away. All would more than likely be listed as science-fiction in a library however. The first one would be the telling of a character in an era similar to ancient Persia, with the second being set in a more medieval-fantasy setting, and finally the last well... think star wars meets final fantasy. Some problems at present I have if any of you have any thoughts on this are:

1) I need someone who is of Arabic decent so that I can talk to them about things such as the desert. I have not moved much outside of forested areas so though I can imagine, I have no experience in those sections.

2) Extreme lack of self-confidence in my own work. I'm constantly changing things in them.
  





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Mon Jul 30, 2007 2:41 am
Leja says...



Ah hah! Kel's husband appears! Glad to have you here. Kel's a pretty cool person, so, by association, I assume you are too.

Are you one of those people who can never stop editing? Like you'll never really finish something? Join the club :D

See you around! *waves*
-Amelia
  








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