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Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:31 pm
prio says...



hi everybody im just letting you know ive joined this website,purely to get my stoires rated by you guys and critics i would like evryones view on it
  





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Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:33 pm
Emerson says...



You've already met me in the chat (I had to direct him here, poor newbie! couldn't find his way round...)

Welcome :-D What kind of story is it?
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:37 pm
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Yay! Well, I hope you enjoy. You'll get used to the layout soon... honest. ;)
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:37 pm
Incandescence says...



prio--


Welcome to the YWS. We are more than happy to review pieces you post.

Keep in mind that there are two major guidelines you should use when making posts:

(1) Proper grammar and spelling are a must--this is, after all, a writing site; if you want us to care about your stories, show us that you care enough to give them a proper edit and comb-through.

(2) Reviewing others' work on the site is a great way to get reviews. Not only do you make yourself known to other writers, you also indicate the type of stories you will be posting which will generate interest for your piece.

I hope you find your stay here symbiotic.


All the best,
Brad
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:40 pm
-KayJuran- says...



Hope you're having fun here so far!

Um.. know this has already been said, but what are you writing? What's your favourite genre as well?

Feel free to send me a message or something if you get lost - more than welcome to help. :)

See ya round,

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Sat Oct 28, 2006 11:56 pm
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I hate to repeat Incandescence, but I'm a bitter old bat (okay, not old, but definately bitter), and I'm naturally leery of anyone who flounces in, proclaims themselves to be "great story writer," but uses chatspeak.
Maybe you're really good, but just being lazy. I don't know. Like I said, bitter.

Now that I've gotten that out of the way - hi, I'm Meep, fellow n00b and procrastinator extrodinaire. What can I do for you?
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Sun Oct 29, 2006 12:40 am
luna_the_shiekah says...



Hullo! I hope you have a good stay here. And I have to second err...third? What Incandescence said. It's hard to believe someone's a great writer when they use chatspeak in their forum posts.

But I'm just picky. ;)

So, welcome!

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Sun Oct 29, 2006 2:20 am
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Well, I gotta fourth Incan there, but welcome! And here's your gift: :D :) :( :o :shock: :? 8) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :wink: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen: :elephant: :D :) :( :o :shock: :? 8) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :wink: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen: :elephant:
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Sun Oct 29, 2006 3:43 am
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Welcome to YWS! It's pretty cool here--PM me with any questions, okay? :D
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Sun Oct 29, 2006 11:53 am
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Hey Prio! Welcome to YWS.
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Sun Oct 29, 2006 1:29 pm
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Sadly i agree with everyone else. I was like this when i first joined, but now i know better, welcome anyway.
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Sun Oct 29, 2006 1:52 pm
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Welcome Prio.
  





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Mon Oct 30, 2006 1:49 pm
Wiggy says...



Pri to the o!!!! How's it goin' in your neck of the woods? I see it's been awhile since ya joined-how do you like it? Hopefully you'll have found it like I have-the members are awesome, the crits are constructive, and the community here is amazing!!!!!!!

I'm Wiggy by the way, current insane member of YWS. I love everything about this place, and I'm sooooo glad you're here! *huggles* Just pm me if you have any questions or just want to talk. I'm on here all the time!

Happy writing!

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Mon Oct 30, 2006 5:49 pm
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Welcome Prio!

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Tue Oct 31, 2006 12:18 am
Chandni says...



We're allways up for new story writers :) Welcome !!
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