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Sat Oct 28, 2006 2:42 am
Kel says...



The only thing I'm needing an unbiased critique on is my NaNo in Dec! It's harder to find someone to critique a novel that's 50,000 words. :(
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 2:45 am
Fishr says...



Try finding someone to crit over 100,000 words of an unfinished novel, LOL!
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 1:23 pm
Kel says...



Good luck! XD I wouldn't mind trying it in December, if you'd like. What genre is it?
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 1:40 pm
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O.M.G. I am a horrible gift-giver. I could've sworn I'd posted one on here, but I guess I didn't, as I just read this entire thread and can't find it. So...here you go. :D :) :( :o :shock: :? :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :wink: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen: :elephant: :D :) :( :o :shock: :? :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :wink: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen: :elephant:

EDIT: I just realized why I thought you had a gift. You just so happened to be at the top of the page where I posted my first gift in a loooooooooong time last week in the "Welcome New Members" thread. So now you don't have to share.
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 7:00 pm
Kel says...



^^ Thank you for the gift, niteown! The elephant's kinda creepy, though. :T
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 7:09 pm
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:elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant:

[s]Bwahaha. We like scaring newbies.[/s]

I mean, niteowl, stop scaring new members! ;)
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 7:17 pm
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I think we may all be deranged... o.O

*looks askance at Cassandra and Niteowl*

Anyway! I have not welcomed you, for which I should be summarily shot. Apologies, greetings and salutations. :wink:

Above all, welcome, and I sincerely hope that you have as fine a time improving this place as we have wrecking it. ^_~

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Sat Oct 28, 2006 7:25 pm
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Cassandra says...



Deranged? I perfer "different" or "unique"!

Okay, okay. "Disturbed" might be accurate as well.

Frightened yet, Kel? ;)

How's your NaNo coming, by the way?
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:05 pm
Snoink says...



If it makes you feel better, I've found people here that would gladly critique all of my 125K novel. O_o

Just critique and stuff and you'll find plenty of people who want to grab your stuff. :)
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:59 pm
-KayJuran- says...



Well, if you're looking for someone to critique something.... what if you offer a swap? For every 1000 words of your work that they critique, you critique the same amount of theirs... think that'd work? ;)

Anyway, I'd love to chat anytime if you'd like to share your NaNo wisdom. Feel free to pm me, e-mail, msn, whatever...

So what's your plot so far...? I'm intrigued. Oh, and you said your name on the site is Toast, right? I'll have to look you up.

And, um... as I haven't said it yet...

WELCOME!!!!!!!!!

See ya round,

Kay
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 11:44 pm
Kel says...



Cassandra: :cry: Huffalumps and woozles!

DD: A few curtains, a couple of throw pillows... and it'll be great! It's already great, but it'll be tidier? And thank you!

Cass again!: You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake! But you are a deranged writer. :D My NaNo has its own thread in the NaNo forum. Take a look and weep for me!

Snoink: I'm just horribly lazy. :( I guess I need to get up offa my thang if I want others to do the same!

My plot? Oh, my plot. I'll put that in my thread about being sick of my story, Kay! :D Go over and take a look and I'll meet you there! That way, I don't clog all this up with NaNo junk.
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