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I have black thoughts



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Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:31 pm
Black Thought says...



therefore my name's the same.


I write those thoughts down from time to time. And now I'm trying to get some critiques on those thoughts so that I can become a better writer, gain more recognition and perhaps even make some money off it. Any advice would be appreciated.

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Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:35 pm
peanut19 says...



Hi Black Thought, I'm peanut, welcome to YWS. You will get lots of advice on here, everyone is always willing to help. There are rules though, not anything too hard.
* NO CAPS PLEASE. No chat speak either.---> Dat wuz gr8t.
* The 2:1 ratio. It just means you need to try to review twice for every non review post you have.
* Rate your work (G,PG,PG-13, R) R is for things with profanity, the f-word stuff like that.

If you follow these rules you should be good. So what's you favorite book? Do you play any instruments or any sports?

PM me if you have any questions.
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Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:46 pm
SeleneForeverDream says...



Hey Black! Welcome to YWS! :D

On YWS there are a bunch of things you can do besides being in the Literature forums. You can create your own blog and comment on others when you click the 'Blogs' button on the header. You can also join groups if you'd like, based off of what interests you! The YWS Chat is a lot of fun as well, and you can go there by clicking on the 'Chat' box on the main page.

Also, if you'd like to request a review from an Instructor here, please PM them from this thread-

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I have some more questions! Do you prefer handwriting things to typing? Do you have any pets? Do you have any hobbies? What do you enjoy doing in your spare time?

If you have a question, feel free to PM me.

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