Hey! Well, we are friends, so I just wanted to say some stuff.
If you are ever in need of someone to critique your work, then by all means, ask me. I will be more than willing. And if you have any questions, just PM me. Well, I'll cya around!
Hi Welcome to YWS, hope you became as addicted as I am. ^_^
Anyway, you didn't say much about yourself, so there isn't much I can say If you write Fiction, then perhaps I'll stumble upon your work - That's were I usually lurk. I go around as Esme here, and if you have any questions, pr just so, feel free to PM me!
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge