Young Writers Society

This month I am going to be doing a lot of editing. First, my novella, The Art Murderers. Then I plan on editing a yet unnamed short story. To prepare myself, I would like to do some editing/reviewing around here.

In exchange for my reviews I ask that you sign my guestbook at http://joeduncko.com/guestbook/ . When that guestbook reachers 100 signs I plan to release my newest short story to the public. I would really appreciate the views! Please post on my guestbook BEFORE I review. I don't have the time to beg you later.

Now, my favorite genres are:

Urban fantasy
Light romance
Adventure
Sci-fi
Anything anime-like (If you know that that is, cool. If not, still cool.)

I WILL NOT review:

Long poetry (more that 5 verses or whatever you poetry people call paragraphs)
Very high fantasy
Realistic drama (if I can compare it to my mother's soaps, sorry, I can't stand it)

If your genre is not in either one of those lists, or not exactly, feel free to post it anyway. Chances are I won't mind it.

I WILL read the first chapter of your novel. No more. Sorry, I don't have time for that... if I did, I would.

If you want some examples of my work...

Short story - http://joeduncko.com/2011/01/22/friends-a-short-story/
Poetry - http://joeduncko.com/2011/03/08/if-i-co ... ic-a-poem/
Reviews - post763729.html#p763729

Now, lay 'em on me!

Heres a short poem.

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Please review!

@Boo: Done! I'm not sure if you signed my guestbook, though. Please do when you get a chance! (see the first post for more info).

Would you mind reviewing this for me? It's the prologue for another story (which I'm not asking you to read). But I'm warning you, it's a little messed up. And I would be happy to sign your guestbook!
Thank you!
Casey

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@CaseySaz: It has been done. Thanks for the sign!

Would you like to review chapters one and two of my new romantic novel My Amber Eyes?

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Please.

Can you review this story. Its for a contest due on Monday.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic84133.html

As for the review, try to be as critical as you want so that the story can be polished especcially on the style involve, the characters and the plot.

Thanks, and i will sign up after the review

@Rascalover: Chapters 1 and 2 reviewed. I hope you don't mind signing my guestbook in exchange (see my signature)!

@cannoncomplex: Serial Experiments Lain quote made me happy ^-^. Trippy anime. Anyway, review is done. I hope you will sign my guestbook (see my signature)!

I did sign your guestbook and your blog looks really interesting.
Wondering if you could critique my Harry Potter fanfic
Occlumency Lessons
I was hoping for someone to critique character consistency and factual information, but if you aren't a big fan than any sort of critique would be nice.
Thanks so much

@empressoftheuniverse: Done! Sorry I haven't read Harry Potter... I hope my review was up to par, though.

My July Review thread is now closed. Thanks for visiting!