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YWS is the Best



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Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:45 pm
Mikko says...



YWS IS THE BEST

You

Will

Stay for an


Infinite number of years- as long as the

Sun or


Time exists, you'll be in our

Hearts and ears

Every day


Because

Everyone will

Spread your name and

Together celebrate your fame

!



We love you! You're the best!
when she needs to shelter from reality she takes a dip in my daydreams
  





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Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:55 pm
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TylynRae says...



Yay YWS! This was lovely =] I haven't seen an acrostic poem in forever. Brings back the fifth grade memories =]]
TylynTyrannosaurus<3 (tydecker777)
  





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Tue Jun 28, 2011 11:28 pm
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Veritas says...



Reminds me of middle school!!!!! Lol acrostic is amazing! People look down on it because it's so simple but I like it! Sometimes short and simple is the best. YWS for life!
The words you write reflect your soul. Make every word count.
  





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Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:27 am
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emmylou1995 says...



This was totally awesome! I liked how all the sentances flowed together.
When all you have is nothing, there is alot to go around.
  





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Thu Jun 30, 2011 2:47 pm
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matthewmazer says...



I don't think I've ever seen an acrostic on YWS before. I haven't even done one in forever.
I Like this one and I also like how you never mentioned the vertical column (or whatever its called, the first letter of each line), I've personally always had troubled with that.
We've all been sorry. We've all been hurt. How we survive is what makes us who we are.
{20150529)
  





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Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:10 pm
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SophiaBurnette says...



Haha, this is a really cute poem, not to mention I really agree with the message. YWS IS the best! :D (and I only joined yesterday…)
"I don't cause commotions, I am one." Elphaba (Wicked the musical)
  





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Wed Jul 13, 2011 10:52 pm
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June3 says...



Cute. Just plain cute. I LOVE YWS!
There once was a women named Kent,
Whose nose was rather quite bent.
One day I suppose,
She followed her nose,
And nobody knows where she went.
-Unknown
  





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Fri Jul 15, 2011 5:00 pm
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HHemayed says...



wow!This poem is awesome. Love it, keep up the good work. :)
To be alive is not to breathe, eat or drink. It's your ability to prove your existence.
  





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Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:08 pm
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lv2dance97 says...



Wow this was actually really good! All I can remember about arocostics in grade school is making one for my name which always stunk because I have an "x" in my name... probably the most poetic acrosic I've ever seen. great job <3
  








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