YWS is the Best

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Mikko
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Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:45 pm
Mikko says... · Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:45 pm
YWS IS THE BEST

You

Will

Stay for an


Infinite number of years- as long as the

Sun or


Time exists, you'll be in our

Hearts and ears

Every day


Because

Everyone will

Spread your name and

Together celebrate your fame

!



We love you! You're the best!
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TylynRae
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Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:55 pm
TylynRae says... · Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:55 pm
Yay YWS! This was lovely =] I haven't seen an acrostic poem in forever. Brings back the fifth grade memories =]]
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Veritas
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Tue Jun 28, 2011 11:28 pm
Veritas says... · Tue Jun 28, 2011 11:28 pm
Reminds me of middle school!!!!! Lol acrostic is amazing! People look down on it because it's so simple but I like it! Sometimes short and simple is the best. YWS for life!
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emmylou1995
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Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:27 am
emmylou1995 says... · Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:27 am
This was totally awesome! I liked how all the sentances flowed together.
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matthewmazer
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Thu Jun 30, 2011 2:47 pm
matthewmazer says... · Thu Jun 30, 2011 2:47 pm
I don't think I've ever seen an acrostic on YWS before. I haven't even done one in forever.
I Like this one and I also like how you never mentioned the vertical column (or whatever its called, the first letter of each line), I've personally always had troubled with that.
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SophiaBurnette
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Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:10 pm
SophiaBurnette says... · Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:10 pm
Haha, this is a really cute poem, not to mention I really agree with the message. YWS IS the best! :D (and I only joined yesterday…)
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June3
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Wed Jul 13, 2011 10:52 pm
June3 says... · Wed Jul 13, 2011 10:52 pm
Cute. Just plain cute. I LOVE YWS!
There once was a women named Kent,
Whose nose was rather quite bent.
One day I suppose,
She followed her nose,
And nobody knows where she went.
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HHemayed
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Fri Jul 15, 2011 5:00 pm
HHemayed says... · Fri Jul 15, 2011 5:00 pm
wow!This poem is awesome. Love it, keep up the good work. :)
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lv2dance97
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Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:08 pm
lv2dance97 says... · Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:08 pm
Wow this was actually really good! All I can remember about arocostics in grade school is making one for my name which always stunk because I have an "x" in my name... probably the most poetic acrosic I've ever seen. great job <3
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